Beside You on the Main Street by Jillian Weise

We were stepping out of a reading
in October, the first cold night,
and we were following this couple,
were they at the reading? and because
we were lost, I called out to them,
“Are you going to the after party?”
The woman laughed and said no
and the man kept walking, and she
was holding his hand like I hold yours,
though not exactly, she did not
need him for balance. Then what
got into me? I said, “How long
have you been married?” and she said
“Almost 30 years” and because
we were walking in public, no secret,
tell everyone now it’s official,
I said, “How’s marriage?” The man
kept walking. The woman said,
“It gets better but then it gets different.”
The man kept walking.

The poet declares her love publicly and officially. I suppose she should be dating or newly wed. She is curious about how the couple’s marriage is like. The couple said that 30 years of marriage gets different. Being different in the way that the woman holds hands with her husband as if she does not need him. And the man just keeps walking without speaking or showing any emotions. Maybe the love has changed to a different level or different state as time goes by that only the couple knows how it is like.

Introduction To Poetry by Billy Collins

I ask them to take a poem
and hold it up to the light
like a color slide

or press an ear against its hive.

I say drop a mouse into a poem
and watch him probe his way out,

or walk inside the poem’s room
and feel the walls for a light switch.

I want them to waterski
across the surface of a poem
waving at the author’s name on the shore.

But all they want to do
is tie the poem to a chair with rope
and torture a confession out of it.

They begin beating it with a hose
to find out what it really means.

Billy Collins 是美國詩人,出身於紐約市,擅長談話式詩作。我很喜歡這首詩,簡明亦親切地討論看詩的態度。詩人邀請我們看一首詩如同拿著一張色彩的照片在燈光下細察,擠著耳朵聆聽它如蜂巢發出的聲音,又像一隻老鼠運用牠的鬚嗅出通道,亦像走進一間漆黑的房間摸出開燈掣,或像滑雪馳程一樣看見在彼岸的詩人,與詩人產生共鳴,看詩其實可以這樣充滿趣味。

但是,有些詩作很艱深,我們有時也會很苦惱,一直求問究竟它的意思是甚麼。那個時候,我們就會torture a confession out of it 又或者beating it with a hose,這樣的情況好多時都會出現,可是詩人好像不大認同這種看詩的態度呢。

Blackberry-Picking by Seamus Heaney

Late August, given heavy rain and sun
For a full week, the blackberries would ripen.
At first, just one, a glossy purple clot
Among others, red, green, hard as a knot.
You ate that first one and its flesh was sweet
Like thickened wine: summer’s blood was in it
Leaving stains upon the tongue and lust for
Picking. Then red ones inked up and that hunger
Sent us out with milk cans, pea tins, jam-pots
Where briars scratched and wet grass bleached our boots.
Round hayfields, cornfields and potato-drills
We trekked and picked until the cans were full,
Until the tinkling bottom had been covered
With green ones, and on top big dark blobs burned
Like a plate of eyes. Our hands were peppered
With thorn pricks, our palms sticky as Bluebeard’s.

We hoarded the fresh berries in the byre.
But when the bath was filled we found a fur,
A rat-grey fungus, glutting on our cache.
The juice was stinking too. Once off the bush
The fruit fermented, the sweet flesh would turn sour.
I always felt like crying. It wasn’t fair
That all the lovely canfuls smelt of rot.
Each year I hoped they’d keep, knew they would not.

This poem is about childhood memory of innocence, maturation and disillusionment with the harsh reality. At first, given all the good conditions, the speaker can taste delicious ripen berries. However, later on, despite all the hard work with good intentions spent on picking those fruitful blackberries, he realizes that bad things do happen and would turn good things into destruction. And maturation is a process of going through bad and unfair experience but still keeping optimism yet knowing that the reality is not what we expect.

The Story, Around the Corner by Naomi Shihab Nye

The Story, Around the Corner
is not turning the way you thought
it would turn, gently, in a little spiral loop,
the way a child draws the tail of a pig.
What came out of your mouth,
a riff of common talk.
As a sudden weather shift on a beach,
sky looming mountains of cloud
in a way you cannot predict
or guide, the story shuffles elements, darkens,
takes its own side. And it is strange.
Far more complicated than a few phrases
pieced together around a kitchen table
on a July morning in Dallas, say,
a city you don’t live in, where people
might shop forever or throw a thousand stories
away. You who carried or told a tiny bit of it
aren’t sure. Is this what we wanted?
Stories wandering out,
having their own free lives?
Maybe they are planning something bad.
A scrap or cell of talk you barely remember
is growing into a weird body with many demands.
One day soon it will stumble up the walk and knock,
knock hard, and you will have to answer the door.

The poet supposes the story (of her concern) will take a twist and turn, not as straightforward as like common talk. When circumstances change, the elements of the story are turning dark and take its own side. The poet feels strange because the story is actually far more complicated than what people tell in a city which only knows shopping and where the poet does not live in and does not belong to. But the people whom don’t know the real side of the story will give out different kinds of versions of the story. The story seems like having its own life and ever-changing freely. The poet does not dare to tell a tiny bit of her story because she is confused that if it is what the people in the city want to hear. The poet even doubts if the stories which wander around in the city are being told with a hideous motive behind. The bits and pieces of the story are starting to catch the attention of people who want to know the truth and the poet feels that someday she has a responsibility to tell the real story when the demand is growing high.

When Dealing With Emotions by Audrey Heller

When dealing with emotions, it’s
a sensitive thing, you experience
all kinds of feelings, it’s like being
on a swing! One moment you’re up,
the next you’re down, either you’re
smiling, or tend to frown! There are
many contributing factors, as things
change so quickly, from day to day!
You can’t put your finger on it, so
who’s to say! Why try, to figure out
the reasons, for this emotional crisis,
it’s just one of those things. Why not
wait until tomorrow and see, what
it brings. I’m sure by then, it will be
over and you’ll wonder why, you had
felt, you were heading for a fall. Just
keep in mind, emotions are very tricky
and if it’s any consolation, there are
times, it affects us all!

Living in our city, we can get very emotional sometimes, especially negative moods and emotions, which can be very dangerous because they could damage and destroy us. To calm down and release our stress, I think the best way is to find someone to talk to or go to the park to have a quick run. Running can be refreshing because you take deep breath during the run. It does help. When something or someone turns me on, I also face the problem of being emotional. And I am working hard on it to try to keep myself calm and balanced, not to let negative emotions take over me or ruin me; otherwise the consequence can be very serious. I pray that we can better control our emotions in this stressful city. Don’t let emotions control you! Cool Down!!! Good Luck!!!

Still I Rise by Maya Angelou

You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise.

Does my sassiness upset you?
Why are you beset with gloom?
’Cause I walk like I’ve got oil wells
Pumping in my living room.

Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I’ll rise.

Did you want to see me broken?
Bowed head and lowered eyes?
Shoulders falling down like teardrops,
Weakened by my soulful cries?

Does my haughtiness offend you?
Don’t you take it awful hard
’Cause I laugh like I’ve got gold mines
Diggin’ in my own backyard.

You may shoot me with your words,
You may cut me with your eyes,
You may kill me with your hatefulness,
But still, like air, I’ll rise.

Does my sexiness upset you?
Does it come as a surprise
That I dance like I’ve got diamonds
At the meeting of my thighs?

Out of the huts of history’s shame
I rise
Up from a past that’s rooted in pain
I rise
I’m a black ocean, leaping and wide,
Welling and swelling I bear in the tide.

Leaving behind nights of terror and fear
I rise
Into a daybreak that’s wondrously clear
I rise
Bringing the gifts that my ancestors gave,
I am the dream and the hope of the slave.
I rise
I rise
I rise.

This poem is about an individual / society protesting against the slavery and oppression of the oppressors in light of their history being twisted like lies, people being shot and killed, nights of terror and fear, and shameful painful hateful past. Despite heavy darkness is glooming all around, he/she walk proudly on the street with self-confidence and is hopeful about the future. Similarly, under our current local political darkness, the poem reminds us that if we keep and protect our gift of ancestral culture and pass it to our next generation, I believe that we can still rise and see light in darkness. Amen.

Autumn Song by Katherine Mansfield

Now’s the time when children’s noses
All become as red as roses
And the colour of their faces
Makes me think of orchard places
Where the juicy apples grow,
And tomatoes in a row.

And to-day the hardened sinner
Never could be late for dinner,
But will jump up to the table
Just as soon as he is able,
Ask for three times hot roast mutton–
Oh! the shocking little glutton.

Come then, find your ball and racket,
Pop into your winter jacket,
With the lovely bear-skin lining.
While the sun is brightly shining,
Let us run and play together
And just love the autumn weather.

This poem is cheerful and bestows a sense of energy on the readers. It is a season of fun and thanksgiving. The effect of autumn on the children’s faces makes them look lovely and adorable when the poet uses the images of roses, orchard, apples and tomatoes to describe them. The little sinner jumps up to the table on the day of thanksgiving and have a happy feast despite his little gluttony. As the cold winter will be coming, the poet invites both children and adults to take the chance to run and play together in this good autumn weather and have some fun. It is a season of joy and happiness.

Color by Christina Georgina Rossetti

What is pink? a rose is pink
By a fountain’s brink.
What is red? a poppy’s red
In its barley bed.
What is blue? the sky is blue
Where the clouds float thro’.
What is white? a swan is white
Sailing in the light.
What is yellow? pears are yellow,
Rich and ripe and mellow.
What is green? the grass is green,
With small flowers between.
What is violet? clouds are violet
In the summer twilight.
What is orange? Why, an orange,
Just an orange!

I like this poem very much because it plays with different simple colours by explaining what they look like using imagery that is positive and of beauty in nature. The poet could have chosen something negative to relate to different colours. But the poet invites us to see things in positivity and in beauty. After using positive similarities and parallels for different colours for several times, the poet is quite witty and mischievous by making a lazy and assumable representation and at the same time making a pun at the very end of the poem which makes the whole poem very funny. What’s more, the poem has a couplet rhyme scheme which makes reading very musical and eloquent.

I think that by questioning what each colour is, the poet emphasises the importance of each color and its merit and virtue and helps us recognise their beauty in nature around us in our everyday life. It is not a difficult thing to find out beauty in our mundane daily life if we try to look at things carefully just around us at different moments of time.

Composed upon Westminster Bridge, September 3, 1802 by William Wordsworth

Earth has not anything to show more fair:
Dull would he be of soul who could pass by
A sight so touching in its majesty:
This City now doth, like a garment, wear
The beauty of the morning; silent, bare,
Ships, towers, domes, theatres, and temples lie
Open unto the fields, and to the sky;
All bright and glittering in the smokeless air.
Never did sun more beautifully steep
In his first splendour, valley, rock, or hill;
Ne’er saw I, never felt, a calm so deep!
The river glideth at his own sweet will:
Dear God! the very houses seem asleep;
And all that mighty heart is lying still!

This poem celebrates the beauty of London in the early morning. London, an industrial city as opposed to nature, is generally thought to be busy, noisy, polluted, smoky and crowded; but now, at this morning moment, London is ‘silent’, ‘calm’ and ‘fair’ with clean air, the buildings and structures are at one with nature, ‘open unto the fields, and to the sky’.

The river, which should be the Thames, can flow freely ‘at his own sweet will’ without the intrusion of factories and ships. ‘Mighty heart’ which refers to government, trade and industry is ‘lying still’ and at peace with the world of nature before it takes to runs its activities. The poet can see London through the natural perspective which is very rarely adopted by poets at his time.

“Bright star, would I were stedfast as thou art” by John Keats

Bright star, would I were stedfast as thou art—
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
Like nature’s patient, sleepless Eremite,
The moving waters at their priestlike task
Of pure ablution round earth’s human shores,
Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors—
No—yet still stedfast, still unchangeable,
Pillow’d upon my fair love’s ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live ever—or else swoon to death.

The speaker wants to be as steadfast and unchanging as the star but he does not want to be alone watching with eyes open patiently, sleeplessly and eternally the moving waters flowing round the earth purifying the humanity like a ritual priest work or the snow covering the mountains and the moors. He wants to still unchangingly and eternally awake rest upon his lover’s bosom, to feel its softness and hear her breath; otherwise, he would rather die.

I think the purification of nature is compared to the sublimation of his lover’s love which like the nature washing away and whitening the sin of humanity, his lover makes him feel better, more like a human with feelings than a non-human subject.